Taking the blood out of this so everyone can see ,same image as this one but with out the blood in it

Watch my life,
Pass me by,
In the rear view mirror
Pictures frozen in time
Are becoming clearer
I don't wanna waste another day
Stuck in the shadow of my mistakes


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The water was cold that day as Max swam to the surfest with a bag in his hand ,It had been two and a half year’s sine Koi had kidnapped him ,and kept him on his boat from is family and friends and Max have ,had enough. “I will show him, I’m not been pushed around anymore” Max throat to himself “It’s time I take things in to my own hands”, he was 17 and a half now and was very aware what was happen to his life.
A Ghoti happily swam up to him and pulled on his pants, Max looked down at it “Go away I can’t play” moving his hand back and forwards to get him away ,the ghoti happy swam in circles around Max why he climbed back on to the boat and put the bag down on the deck “Do you have it?” An old dirty man asked Max “NO” Max replied and looked down to the deck “I hid it, you will never find it now” putting his jumper back on.
“you did What” with anger the man walked up to Max and hit him in the face “YOU LITTLE SHIT”, Max fell to the ground with his mouth bleeding and then the man started to kick him in the stomach,
“STOP” someone called out
Max gave a grin “Cough, Cough! . . . . . You can beat me as much as you like, I will not telling you were it is” looking up with a smile, but his smile quickly lift him when he saw who was in front of him.
“Stand up” Koi told him why standing over him.
Max looked away and stood up holding his stomach then wiping his mouth.
“I will only ask you, this once BOY, Were is it” koi asked why holding a gun at max, Max smiled taking his hand off his stomach “I’m not afraid of you anymore! . . . . “Then pointed to the dark water on the side of the boat “Down there”.
*BANG*
the gun went off and Koi watched as the smile on max’s face was replaced with shock, Max looked down at his stomach and put his hand on it and started to walk back, he then fell over the side off the boat and landed into the cold water and started to sink, living a trail of watery blood behind him, he closed his eyes in pain as he hugged his stomach “it was not went to happen like this” Max told himself.
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Yay!! It’s done, I almost did not put it up, don’t know why I’m so happy with it X3

any way i tryed to keep it simple-ish but had to add just somethings in ,i was going to put the bottom of the ship at the top but er it started to look to much in the end so i lift it out

by the way I love max’s shots lol and I cannot remember the last time I draw “dragon” . . . that the little ghoti and max’s petpet ,also the little ghoti saves him ,how you may ask . . . . Well . . . sorry can’t tell you, you just have to wait
well hope you like it ,tell me what you think
Tarzz ~

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Song/melody that inspired this was:
Skillet – Hero - [link]

Characters in the image Young Max & Dragon (Max's petpet)
Media: pencil, paper, scaner,Photoshop7
Art 2011©Tarzz
Character 2011©Tarzz96

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