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Bloody Mary: Tell Me Why

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Tell Me Why

In my dream children sing a song of love for every boy and girl
The sky is blue and fields are green and laughter is the language of the world
Then I wake and all I see is a world full of people in need

Tell me why (why) does it have to be like this?
Tell me why (why) is there something I have missed?
Tell me why (why) cos I don't understand.
When so many need somebody we don't give a helping hand.
Tell me why?

Everyday I ask myself what will I have to do to be a man?
Do I have to stand and fight to prove to everybody who I am?
Is that what my life is for to waste in a world full of war?

Tell me why (why,why,does the tiger run)
Tell me why (why why do we shoot the gun)
Tell me why (why,why do we never learn)
Can someone tell us why we let the forest burn?

(why,why do we say we care)
Tell me why (why,why do we stand and stare)
Tell me why (why,why do the dolphins cry)
Can some one tell us why we let the ocean die ?

(why,why if we're all the same)
tell me why (why,why do we pass the blame)
tell me why (why,why does it never end)
can some one tell us why we cannot just be friends?

ok i was going to put this in later but hey i just finshed it sooo here it is,
i'm so so so happy how this one came out i would have liked to have done more but it just started to look a bit messy so i tock alot out but any way i'm still very happy with it any way this is 1st prize of my contest that the great :icongeor18: won
and she asked for her Bloody Mary to be done i hope you like it mate :hug:
and thank you so so much for your enter

Characters in the image Bloody Mary
Media: pencil, paper, scaner,Photoshop7
Art 2009©Tarzz
Character 2009©geor18
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hi mate! you know this is the first critique that I´m able to write thanks to you <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug" /> And of course it would be about the piece you have done for me n_n
Where shall I start? You got 5 stars in the "impact" section because when I saw it in my inbox I isntantly felt in love with the pic, and it was even better when I full viewed this! Bloody mare looks georgeous, her pose and her expressions are wonderful...Specially her expression, this is the first pic of her where she looks lost in her thought, you will see when I upload the comic that she has too many things to think about, and actually she is not as bitchy as she looks like. This image shows this in a way, and also the lyrics that you have submitted with this. The raining helps with this too, and it makes the concept very clear.
Yout style and technique of course diserve 5 stars! Your shading is so deep, and usually deep shadings looks too much artificial but you bend them so well that they look wonderful. They give a very clear impression of contrast and a 3D effect. The light are very well applied too, specially in her face and the manes.
That mysterious background makes the character look more confident and scaring, like she should be <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />
Well I know my english is not as formal as it should be in a critique, but I always get low marks when I have to write a formal letter at school and all that stuff n_n